Wednesday, May 9, 2007
firts post
I'am carlos noriega . born in mexico city 0n 1963. en mexico endig the high school , after estudi tree years on the coleguio de bachilleres and gradued, afteer maqued a test for enter the univercidad autonoma de mexico on the eschool of architectur. for tree years....after that becoming to literal surce.
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Welcome to the blog, Carlos. I appreciate your effort to write your first post, well done! You have some typing or spelling errors to correct.
1. proper nouns (names of people, heads of state, and places) start with a capital letter, for example, Mexico City, your university and your name.
2. Check out the link on prepositions particularly for use of on and in.
Check with me next week if you need some more help and try to edit this post before class.
Carlos, all the work you did to correct this article appears to have been lost. You must either use the "Save Now" button or the "Publish" button when you are finished. No matter, I am sure you can correct it again with more confidence. I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
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